We have this project where in we are given the chance to make the ending of the story HELEN. Here is my piece..I was suppose to post it on friendster but cheaters might copy my ending.
“Love will never be the same again.” Helen cries as she writes in her diary.
She said to herself that that would be the last time she’ll fall in love. Together as she
closes her diary, she closes another chapter in her life, closes her heart and the hope
to love again.
Though for Helen, Freddie was the sun, for Freddie, Helen was just a
stranger. But even though, he can never forget the young girls face as she cries. Then
he realizes that he must go back and ask for forgiveness.
6:00 am and Freddie gets ready to go see the young girl. He brings with him
the best flowers in his mom’s garden as he walks and plans what he would say to the
young girl. But to his surprise, No one was there. Helen left and moves to another
town. She’s gone and is never coming back. Freddie is sad but he can’t do anything.
Years after, the memories are still there. As days passes by, Helens face
keeps on haunting Freddie’s mind. He can’t explain what he’s feeling inside. A lot of
girls are dying to be with him yet only Helen is the only girl he loves though he only
met her once. Helen feels the same. She truly believes that first love never dies. She
takes a leave in her work as a call centre agent to go back to the town where Freddie
is. She can’t wait any longer to see, her first love, Freddie. She said that this time she
will fight for her love.
It’s New Years Eve and Freddie’s relatives are in town. Helen drives her car
and parks it beside there old house. She goes down the car and saw Freddie. He was
the same boy she once knew handsome and attractive. She walks towards him to
introduce herself but just as she’s already 7 steps away from him, Freddie shouted
“Marianne!” A young girl runs towards Freddie. Helens world falls flat on her face
once again. She leaves the town thinking that Marianne was Freddie’s daughter.
After 3 years, Freddie hears the news that Helen is coming back to town to
stay for good. He prepares himself and can’t wait to tell Helen how he really feels all
this time. He ordered the best and most expensive flowers in town and fills Helens
door with 3 dozens of them. Helen is coming that night so Freddie rushes home and
puts on his best bib and tucker. 6:00 pm and he walks to go see Helen. He smiles like
the sun as his heart begins to beat faster when He sees that the lights were on. He
clicks the door bell and a beautiful girl opens the door. It’s Helen. He hugs Helen and
told her how much He loves her but it too late. Behind Helen is her husband. Helen
then introduces Freddie to her husband as a young boy runs to hug her mother Helen.
Freddie smiles trying to stop his tears and keeping his composure as he ask, “What a
handsome young boy, what is his name?” Helen then answers, “Freddie” .
Saturday, September 15, 2007
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weeee! nice..^^
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